My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe  using our five senses.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I swam in the warm water.I could smell the salty air. I saw sea shells and they sparkled in the sun. The big waves splashed on the sand. We had rice and chicken for lunch. I was tired because it was hot.
I had fun at the beach. We packed up and went back home.
                                                     By Enzo

What I did at morning tea.

My friends and I played Sonic the Hedgehog. We ran fast. Ion the Nanjo was trying to get us down.
We all had fun.
                                                                  Enzo

Describe Popcorn

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.

I like popcorn because it is salty and delicious. It smells like butter when it is cooked in the microwave. It looks yellow and white. Popcorn is crunchy when it is hot.

                                                          Enzo