I am a Year 3 learner at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Mrs Deeney.
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Wednesday, 21 March 2018
My Trip To The Beach
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe using our five senses.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I swam in the warm water.I could smell the salty air. I saw sea shells and they sparkled in the sun. The big waves splashed on the sand. We had rice and chicken for lunch. I was tired because it was hot.
I had fun at the beach. We packed up and went back home.
By Enzo
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